You were anxious for no reason--it's a great story, dear! I think I liked it better the second time around. Severus's grand entrance at the ball set the tone for the entire story, and he didn't disappoint. You kept Snape in character, Harry clueless, and Ginny trampy--perfection.
The ending was adorable with the hidden twin and Snape's snarks about Poppy. Great job!