NoooooooooOOOOOOOOOOOOooooooooooooo It's not the end! D*rn it! Lol~ DOn't leave it that way! Ha~ it feels unfinished, methinks!
Anyway, ignore the screaming banshee above, that's the frustration talking. The part about the goblins are fun! Harry dead in the goblins account. lmao! The ritual is the hotest part of the story! Wow! Now why did Snape run away??? :( what happens? will Harry go and find Snape again? Though the story is good, in terms of actions/description, I don't see much of character description... then again, this is not about who they are, just what they are doing....
Argh~~~ nevermind, I'm sleepy from over-extending my pc time on reading stories on snarry_games. Thank you for an entertaining story!