Just so you know, your story formatting must have been messed up. It cut out a huge section, I know there HAS to be more. That "The End" at the bottom had to have been wrong!!!!!!! Come on woman, you can't leave us hanging like that, eventually our arms will get tired and we'll fall. And you really don't want that many broken bones on your conscious, do you?
Well, what I got to read was great! Poor Harry was always a little slow on the up-take. Sneaky, Snarky, Slytherin Severus! (Ever wonder why all his best descriptions start with S?) He was at his best, even mostly dead. Wonderful job! Can't wait for the rest! just get that formatting fixed so we can see it! ;) *hugs* Aery