Oh, I absolutely adored this :) You have a very interesting style - it's very simple and almost childlike - it really works with your clueless!Harry and felt very canon. I could really believe that Harry would be that clueless about sex - after all, who's he got to show him that sort of stuff? It's not like there's wizard sex ed - his constant refrain of 'I've been busy' was hilarious and also moving (poor dear! I felt so sorry for him). I loved the end too - it makes sense that Harry, so inept at judging and expressing his own emotions, would think that way, and that Snape wouldn't allow himself to actually say anything positive, even though his body language does all the talking :) A really enjoyable read, thank you! ♥