Oh Delta! I just read this a second time and realized that I never came back after the first go round to leave a comment. I'm so sorry.
I absolutely adored this, and actually enjoyed it even more the second time I read it, which I didn't think possible. ;) (Although the Severus's bilious mushrooming wound made me a bit queasy. I imagine that was the point, so well done, you.) Your Harry was particularly adorable--fully capable of repeated saving Severus, but still uncertain and almost puppy dog-ish. Delightful. *loves*