I love when fandom surprises me with something entirely unexpected and new. The set up here is just genius, I loved Adelaide's self-commentary throughout her manuscript, the Doxies, and the Snarry story, of course. You have some great one-liners in there--a few made me laugh out loud, and I'd be hard-pressed to pick a favorite, but I smiled the entire time I was reading.
Not many Snarry authors pull off humor well, but you nailed it, along with your other genre and your prompt. Congrats on a job well-done!
This is one of my fav lines: he has meat on him where it counts, and I count everything).