I enjoyed this! I liked the dialogue/interaction between Snape and Harry, and especially the backstory about Teddy and James. I haven't encountered anything like that before about the next generation and it was very intriguing! Fascinating. I also love the idea of Snape tutoring James Jr. I'm sure their interaction would be very entertaining. *g* I know most authors don't like to be asked for more story (and it's not as if this story didn't feel complete!) but should you ever feel like writing a prequel/sequel I would certainly love to read it. Oh, and I liked your way of keeping Snape alive (something else I haven't seen done before) and that you made Snape keep looking relatively young. :-)