Oh, oh this was so good it hurt! I really loved it. From the start, ie how Sev survived which was probably the most original way I've read since DH came out, and very believable which is always important to me, to how Harry stumbled upon him and the whole part of the tragic history he has with his kids and Teddy. I loved the atmosphere of the place you selected, it mixed wonderfully with the overall mood of the fic. Horribly sad, but very realistic alas, the whole James part, because that is most often how life works. I admit to being an old cynic but I really disliked the silly rosy ending of DH because it was anything but believable, life is not like that. This is much more up my alley so to say, so I loved every bit of it. Was great to see Sev in character, and an older Harry who somehow, despite still being him, thanks to all that happened, has gotten closer to Severus in attitude and understanding of the world.
Meh, wish my English was better so I could explain it properly, but seriously, I loved it, was a true pleasure to read, so thanks so much!