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medawyn (medawyn) wrote in snarry_games,

Oh, I want more! You've created so many wonderfully complicated elements in this fic - Teddy and James' tragedy, Harry's sexuality, the fickle nature of the Wizarding public, Harry and Snape's past, the future of everyone... you balance them all so well within the scope of what you've written, but I want to know more about everything. You've whetted my appetite!

I think I particularly like the way Ginny and Harry's children are an organic part of Harry's story; they don't overwhelm the fic, but they are a reality of his life. This makes your Harry a nicely three-dimensional character and particularly suited to entering into a more balanced relationship with Snape. I also like the way you've retained Harry's insecurity. He is so relieved to find Snape, to find, for a moment, someone who can understand and solve some of his problems. It's not that Harry isn't an adult in this story, but he's wonderfully vulnerable.

Bravo!