"Late, late, late. Oh, my paws and whiskers!" *pulls giant pocket watch from checked waistcoat*
Oops, wrong fantasy world.
In any case, I'm here to put in my wildly enthusiastic vote for more erotic biting. Preferably somewhere besides the neck, as heaps o' fics already exist wherein the bitee has that particular sensitive spot right where neck meets shoulder, one sharp nip and lawks! he's coming . . Think of all the other nicely tender and oh-so-succulent biteable parts, yes? Shame to neglect them.
Also ice and hot wax. You minx. *applauds* Excellent suggestion.
My plotting. Then maybe my characterization.
Hee, if I were speaking for you I would have said, "Her fabulous characterization. Also, her plots. Which I envy." Because I'm a character slut, you know. They always come first. Do them right and I'm your slave forever. *double entendre free with proof of purchase*
Sorry for the lack of comment pr0n, but I'm applying the principles of Method acting and keeping myself in a state of suspended UST in order to add an air of realistic, erm, frustration to my fic's atmosphere. After all, Snape and Harry are the queensprinces gold-medal champions of delayed gratitification. ;-)