So, so gorgeous. Ahh, I was really looking forward to seeing your entry, and you delivered so much! I love the notebook style. I adore the fine-lined black and white (you've such a delicate touch). The story is lovely.
My favourite image is the one of Snape's bloodied face... it's black and white, and yet I can wholly believe it's blood. I love the blended texture in his skin, and the sharp liquid squiggle highlighting his hair. So awesome.