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psyfic (psyfic) wrote in snapelyholidays,
@ 2008-12-14 00:37:00

Entry tags:

2008_fic, bj, fic4:zephre, h/c, hj, snape/narcissa/lucius, threesome

14th Snapely Holidays Entry - Love and Loyalty (Snape/Narcissa/Lucius)
xmas-stocking
Fic for: zephre
Title: Love and Loyalty
Author: meri_oddities

Pairing Snape/Narcissa/Lucius
Rating Adult (NC-17)
Warnings Threesome
Summary After being left to die in the Shrieking Shack, Severus Snape's life takes a turn for the better
Disclaimer The world of HP and its characters belongs to Rowling. The author of this fic has borrowed them for the purposes of storytelling. No profit was or will be made.
Word count ~12,590
Author Notes Many thanks to my beta's B and L. Any mistakes after all their hard work are my own fault.

Love & Loyalty

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	leela_cat 2008-12-16 10:44 pm UTC (link)
	I love the movement from friends to something more, and the way that Snape heals emotionally as he's healing physically. And that final scene is seriously hot. (Reply to this)

torino10154
2008-12-19 09:33 pm UTC (link)

Lovely. I enjoyed Severus's road to recovery-from his painfully sore throat to his interactions with all the different visitors, mending fences along the way. The relationship with Narcissa and Lucius seemed quite believable as I can easily imagine them inviting a third on occasion. I liked Severus's suspicion of their motives all the way until it wasn't possible to deny it. Wonderful scene with the three of them together. Great job.

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	severed_lies 2008-12-21 06:09 pm UTC (link)
	Oh it's so nice to see Severus enjoying himself, and one supposes that Narcissa would not be refused! (Reply to this)

	chiralove 2008-12-24 05:05 pm UTC (link)
	Mmm, brilliant! I love seeing Severus included in the Malfoy family! <3 (Reply to this)

	zephre 2008-12-24 08:28 pm UTC (link)
	oh, I fail at holiday exchanges again! I missed this when it was posted - but I say a hearty "Thank You!" in advance, mystery author, and will read it shortly! Yay! (Reply to this)

	zephre 2008-12-24 09:28 pm UTC (link)
	yay! oh, man, that was just fantastic - I really enjoyed that everybody came to Sev's bedside while he was recovering, and I just LOVE that Lucius and Narcissa seduce him in tandem. :D beautiful work, and the ending was sublime. Thank you! (Reply to this) (Thread)

	(Anonymous) 2008-12-25 07:13 pm UTC (link)
	No problem at all. I have to admit that I missed my story when it was posted on another fest and the mod had to nudge me. I'm very glad that you enjoyed the story, too. It was fun to write it for you. I had a marvelous time with Narcissa and Lucius being...so Slytherin. g (Reply to this) (Parent)

	gingertart50 2009-01-08 03:23 pm UTC (link)
	Mmmm, very verrrry nice! I do like Slytherins.... (Reply to this)

	eeyore9990 2009-01-08 09:31 pm UTC (link)
	Oh, this is so very yummy. I'm so glad I was able to read this before the reveals. I truly enjoyed how you wrapped everything together and fast forwarded through time without cheating us out of the beautiful story you wove. Excellent. (Reply to this)

	janus 2009-01-11 11:16 pm UTC (link)
	It was so lovely to see Severus live and to choose life, and then to be right, nursed back to health, and not only health but happiness. (Reply to this)