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snapelyhols_mod (snapelyhols_mod) wrote in snapelyholidays,
@ 2011-12-19 01:05:00

Entry tags:

2011_fic, adult, bj, bottom!snape, fic4:community, snape/remus

gift fic for community, Snape/Lupin, adult

Recipient: snapelyholidays community

Author: irena_candy
Title: Turn and Again
Characters: Severus Snape/Remus Lupin
Rating: NC-17, adult
Content Info: *bottom!Snape, tinkering with timeline*
Summary: Snape explains to Lupin how it was that he changed the course of the wizarding world.
Disclaimer: The world of HP and its characters belongs to Rowling. The author of this fic has borrowed them for the purposes of storytelling. No profit was or will be made.
Word count: ~5,340
Author Notes: This is sort of an AU tale, but only in retrospect.

( Turn and Again )

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kelly_chambliss
2011-12-19 10:50 pm UTC (link)

This was fun to read. I've always wondered why no one used a time turner to try to go back and prevent the Potters' deaths (I mean, I understand why JKR didn't; she would have had no story then. But within the HP universe...) Anyway, you write a very plausible version of the possibilities. I like the way your AU ended up, and I like the way you've structured the chronology of the story.

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	irena_candy 2012-01-14 10:32 pm UTC (link)
	Thank you. It's interesting to look for an appropriate point to change the time stream. The logical move is to go to the orphanage and strangle that little Riddle brat in his cradle, but that's awfully hard-hearted, and then where would the story be? (Reply to this) (Parent)

	atdelphi 2011-12-20 12:35 am UTC (link)
	Nicely done. :-) (Reply to this) (Thread)

	irena_candy 2012-01-14 10:33 pm UTC (link)
	Thank you; I'm glad that you enjoyed it. (Reply to this) (Parent)

	torino10154 2011-12-31 05:02 pm UTC (link)
	Ooo, fascinating AU. Rather hawt sex too. ;) Nice work. (Reply to this) (Thread)

	irena_candy 2012-01-14 10:33 pm UTC (link)
	Thank you! It was an interesting story to write. (Reply to this) (Parent)

	countesszero 2011-12-31 07:03 pm UTC (link)
	I loved this more pragmatic solution! Of course they would use Time Turners! Also Lily ending up marrying Sirius is actually plausible! And I'm happy that Harry did not have to go through his terrible childhood! (Reply to this) (Thread)

	irena_candy 2012-01-14 10:35 pm UTC (link)
	Thank you! One of the interesting things about writing time travel stories is considering the ramifications of changing specific events. Changes ripple through time in unexpected ways. (Reply to this) (Parent)

	fluffyllama 2012-01-01 10:20 am UTC (link)
	Great idea and a fun read, thank you! (Reply to this) (Thread)

	irena_candy 2012-01-14 10:36 pm UTC (link)
	Thank you very much for reading and commenting! (Reply to this) (Parent)

	tayefeth 2012-01-04 02:09 am UTC (link)
	Awesome story. Severus would have done it, too, I'm sure... (Reply to this) (Thread)

	irena_candy 2012-01-14 10:36 pm UTC (link)
	Yes, I think so. Severus has a supremely logical turn of mind. (Reply to this) (Parent)

	bonfoi 2012-01-04 04:09 am UTC (link)
	Brilliant! Sex? Yes. Sacrifice? Yes. Romance? Yes. Happy ending? Yes. An interesting take on saving Harry, and Lily. (Reply to this) (Thread)

	irena_candy 2012-01-14 10:38 pm UTC (link)
	Thank you for taking the time to read it. I'm willing to save Lily, but I never have been able to build up enough of a mental image of James to consider him anything but ... canon fodder. (Reply to this) (Parent) (Thread)

	bonfoi 2012-01-15 03:48 am UTC (link)
	Poor James-the-cannon-fodder, born only to help create Harry. Muwahaha! (Reply to this) (Parent)

	etain_antrim 2012-01-06 10:36 pm UTC (link)
	Can I vote for this to be canon? It's very clever. The structure of the story is terrific, too. I hope that Severus and Remus have a happy couple of decades remaking good memories. (Reply to this) (Thread)

	irena_candy 2012-01-14 10:40 pm UTC (link)
	I enjoyed writing it, and I'm glad that you enjoyed reading it. I can imagine Remus bringing out an album of magical pictures to show Severus and telling him about what a great time they had -- and then taking him back to the same place to have a wonderful time all over again. (Reply to this) (Parent)