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snapelyhols_mod (snapelyhols_mod) wrote in snapelyholidays,
@ 2011-12-15 00:17:00

Entry tags:

2011_fic, adult, fic4:leela_cat, h/c, humour, snape/lucius

gift fic for leela_cat, Snape/Lucius, adult

Recipient: leela_cat

Author: eeyore9990
Title: A Step in the Right Direction Might Just Land in Peacock Shit
Characters: Severus Snape/Lucius Malfoy
Rating: Hard R, adult
Content Info: *hurt/comfort of the humorous variety*
Summary: Narcissa has sent Severus to help Lucius. The problem is that Lucius won't tell Severus what sort of help he needs.
Disclaimer: The world of HP and its characters belongs to Rowling. The author of this fic has borrowed them for the purposes of storytelling. No profit was or will be made.
Word count: ~3,450
Author Notes: A few scattered nods to such classics as Labyrinth and The Addams Family. Also, peacocks.

Deepest thanks to my beta reader, who will be credited upon reveals.

( A Step in the Right Direction Might Just Land in Peacock Shit )

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	pale_moonlight 2011-12-15 09:31 am UTC (link)
	Priceless! And I love your Snape. He's delightfully grumpy. (Reply to this)

	atdelphi 2011-12-15 05:25 pm UTC (link)
	laughs I love it! (Reply to this)

	gingertart50 2011-12-15 05:36 pm UTC (link)
	Brilliant! Loved it, love your peacock!Lucius and irritable, put-upon Snape, and teh hot sex. (Reply to this)

leela_cat
2011-12-16 02:09 am UTC (link)

Thank you so much for this fic and the laughter. It's been such a rough and cranky day that this story was a lovely break from it.

Poor Severus. From that very first line, which had me snickering over Severus and the karma that always comes back to ~~bite~~ shit on him.

OMG, poor Lucius. I can't even... that scene where he transformed... ::sporfle::

And how much do I love that it was trial #69 that finally worked.

Thank you so much. ♥

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	secretsolitaire 2011-12-16 03:13 am UTC (link)
	LOL, this was fun. (Reply to this)

	atypicalsnowman 2011-12-16 03:44 am UTC (link)
	I love the dynamic between Lucius and Severus. There's such a great possibility of comedy with the two supposedly straight men, and you had some great moments here. (Reply to this)

	snapesgirl 2011-12-16 09:38 pm UTC (link)
	absolutely brilliant! loved every little detail. (Reply to this)

	kelly_chambliss 2011-12-17 07:32 pm UTC (link)
	This is really fun -- clever and snarky and satisfying (I felt Severus's joy in kicking the bird). I enjoyed Snape's dry, humorous, I've-got-nothing-to-lose tone. Laughed at the word-play in this line in particular: Dreams which were peppered with peacocks and shit (Reply to this)

	therealsnape 2011-12-19 01:55 pm UTC (link)
	Hilarious! Severus's satisfaction when kicking the bird is palpable. And I must admit that Voldy has some remnants of a sense of humour. A peacock, indeed. Love Snape's snarky tone and devil-may-care attitude. (Reply to this)

	purplefluffycat 2011-12-20 07:25 pm UTC (link)
	Very funny and satisfying! I like this take on the Severus/Lucius relationship, and the peacock curse is an excellent idea :-) PurpleFluffyCat x (Reply to this)

	countesszero 2011-12-21 12:18 pm UTC (link)
	That was lovely and very hot!!! Peacock!Lucius! Great idea! :D (Reply to this)

	fluffyllama 2011-12-21 12:26 pm UTC (link)
	Hehehe, that was loads of fun :D (Reply to this)

	torino10154 2011-12-31 03:12 am UTC (link)
	Bwahahahahaha! Rather fitting really. giggles But of course Severus could fix everything in the end. Nice job. (Reply to this)

	szefi 2012-01-01 02:05 pm UTC (link)
	This was funny and hot! And megalol for trial 69 being the final cure:))) (Reply to this)

	inamac 2012-01-05 08:06 pm UTC (link)
	What a lovely conceit! Very typical of them to negotiate favours like this. (Reply to this)

	wonderluck 2012-11-11 03:51 am UTC (link)
	Loved this! The "I can fix this! I can fix this!" had me rolling. Well done. (Reply to this)