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snapelyhols_mod (snapelyhols_mod) wrote in snapelyholidays,
@ 2011-12-02 00:02:00

Entry tags:

2011_fic, bj, bottom!snape, fic4:countess_hp, snape/sirius

gift fic for countess_hp, Severus/Sirius, adult

Recipient: countess_hp

Author: alafaye
Title: Defining Change
Characters: Sirius/Severus, Mistress Black, James/Lily (side)
Rating: R (author recommends not reading in public areas)
Content Info: *blow job, bottom!Severus, mentions mpreg*
Summary: AU. Severus never went to Hogwarts; at a young age, he was placed as a servant in the Black household where he becomes a favorite of Sirius. Mistress Black, however, has other plans for Sirius and places between them the duties of Sirius as a lord.
Disclaimer: The world of HP and its characters belongs to Rowling. The author of this fic has borrowed them for the purposes of storytelling. No profit was or will be made.
Word count: ~3,167
Author Notes Beta was freakingcrups

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	countesszero 2011-12-02 12:24 pm UTC (link)
	Very lovely and cute! I like how Sirius is brave enough to stand to his love to Severus, and even hex James Potter for being rude to Severus! And that end was so promising! I hope you have time to write a sequel one day! If I love one thing more than bottom!Snape it's pregnant Severus! (Reply to this) (Thread)

	alafaye 2012-01-10 09:46 pm UTC (link)
	Thanks! (Reply to this) (Parent)

	kinky_kneazle 2011-12-02 02:38 pm UTC (link)
	What a lovely AU! I liked the 'upstairs/downstairs' atmosphere that you captured with Severus and Cook, and Mrs Black was perfect as the disapproving Mistress. I also love that hint of MPreg at the end :D (Reply to this) (Thread)

	alafaye 2012-01-10 09:46 pm UTC (link)
	Thanks! (Reply to this) (Parent)

	countess_hp 2011-12-03 05:03 am UTC (link)
	OH MY FREAKING GOD! The best Snack fic EVER!! I LOVE IT! No, love doesn't even cover how much I adore this fic. (Reply to this) (Thread)

	alafaye 2012-01-10 09:46 pm UTC (link)
	Thanks :D (Reply to this) (Parent)

	atypicalsnowman 2011-12-03 01:13 pm UTC (link)
	squees Oh, I love Severus as Sirius' Boy. He's so sweet here, and you can feel his disbelief over the situation he's been put in. I really enjoyed this. (Reply to this) (Thread)

	alafaye 2012-01-10 09:46 pm UTC (link)
	Thanks! (Reply to this) (Parent)

	tayefeth 2011-12-05 12:57 am UTC (link)
	I love the banter. (Reply to this) (Thread)

	alafaye 2012-01-10 09:47 pm UTC (link)
	Thanks! (Reply to this) (Parent)

	irena_candy 2011-12-06 03:48 am UTC (link)
	That's an intriguing AU premise, and I think you have handled it very well! (Reply to this) (Thread)

	alafaye 2012-01-10 09:47 pm UTC (link)
	Thanks! (Reply to this) (Parent)

prayer_at_night
2011-12-09 11:32 pm UTC (link)

Haha, delightful!
A very challenging AU to write, I imagine, with Severus being a servant (and having to act and speak like one ;) ), but you managed really well.
I especially love the progress Severus made during the three years, how he can now banter with Sirius' friends and talk to everyone normally. And that everyone showed up at the end was wonderful! I love the playful, loving atmosphere between everyone. :)

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	alafaye 2012-01-10 09:47 pm UTC (link)
	Thanks! (Reply to this) (Parent)

r_grayjoy
2011-12-27 04:19 pm UTC (link)

I'm not typically a fan of alternate setting-type AU, but I am of course a huge fan of Severus/Sirius, so I thought I'd give this a go. And I gotta say, you've created a really cool and interesting AU world here! You've drawn so much from canon that the characterizations still really work. Sirius as rich, entitled, and too impetuous, but good at heart and not willing to be what his family wants; young Severus from a humble background, unconfident, and respectful of tradition; James, Lily, and Remus as loyal friends who'll pick on their friends a bit but always stand by them. And the reaction of James et al. to Severus when they haven't had a history of animosity is great. "Not much to look at" indeed. ::sporfle::

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	alafaye 2012-01-10 09:47 pm UTC (link)
	Thanks :D (Reply to this) (Parent)

	leela_cat 2012-01-04 04:50 am UTC (link)
	This is a fascinating AU. I loved the banter between them all, and that Sirius still stood up to his mother and took Severus with him to James's parents' house this time. Very nicely done. (Reply to this) (Thread)

	alafaye 2012-01-10 09:48 pm UTC (link)
	Thanks! (Reply to this) (Parent)