Oh wow, thank you! I lovelovelove the texture of this; the solemn colours and falling shadows and almost old-world feel of it.
The way that Bella is gazing at Narcissa is wonderful, and Narcissa, on the whole, is just gorgeous (her feet! The curling toes!). Moreover, your Snape - just is Snape. His face is spot-on.
Thank you again - I've been all antsy waiting for my gift to be posted but this, this was definitely worth the wait :D ♥♥♥