Oh, lovely fic! I love memory!loss fics; it's always so fascinating what characters are like wihtout their memories. And Snape thought he and Harry had been together, so adorable. :) I loved Snape in the different stages of returning memory. Uh, those Unspeakables, "just his Hogwarts years", someone pught to hit them. I loved Harry and Severus's banter. The subtlety, and the non-subtlety. :)
And I think Severus needs to take the job offer. He'll know just how to drive Croaker round the twist. *grins evilly*