You hooked me from the very first scene, your description of the Cotswold shop, and Moody surviving as a stuffed rhino just seemed so perfect for him. The way they 'talked' around the issue of their physical relationship was so them, and imagining them working as a dynamic duo to rid the wizarding world of dark objects is a perfect fit for both of them.
Beautifully written, crisp, clear narrative, and you made me look up the word 'twee'! Loved it!