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How a brilliant overture your prologue is! How promising! "About bloody time, Potter.” :D He was right, of course, but still, just once she would have liked to see him lose his perfect composure. - I think she will see. But it was an exclusive idea to let Severus say that he had get what was going on before Minerva told him. The "accident" and the decision not to tell a living soul what really happened - magnificent idea and you've written it perfectly. I love the way Severus looked at Harry to seek a confirmation from him. When Gin asked Harry to save Draco, I said: YES! And when Molly realised her son and Hermione will be together alone, I burst out laughing! And her murmuring for herself - brilliant! I like your official house names. It feels like a homely to me. Oh sweet Merlin! I had a great fun of Harry's and Hermione's conversation about "he-is-gay-he-is-not". That was hilarious! Thank you for that coming out. (Really, Sirius AND Remus… poor Teddy. :)) I must admire how you managed their days to be busy, to make me believe they were busy, only to stop for awhile when H a S were together. (Theirs interactions were amazing, thanks for them.) That's fascinating and in my opinion hard to do. “I can’t remember how many times I thought Nick saved me from being caught. And all this time he was working for the Man… I feel so let down,” admitted Harry, chuckling. - Oh poor sweet Harry, I feel sorry for him now! This, Mr. Potter, is the less imaginative students’ favorite place of assignation. Oh, look over there! Do I see someone in that alcove?” *fell under table laughing* Petr's departure (especially after letting Harry know SS and Peter broke up) made me really sad. (And that is something considering I hated it when he came back and he and Severus were fucking; he wasn't a bad guy though and that was Severus' fault to let that happened; Harry was good to manage that that calmly - my admiration). Well… since Prague is capital city of my country I'm curious, why Prague? (The pictures on the fireplace mantel.) As strange as it is, I'm glad that Harry's infidelity was with Petr - it suited. As much as I despised the fact that they were dunderheads and that they were unfaithful, under the circumstances it wasn't as bad as I was afraid it will be. That means you've written it perfectly. I'm so sad I've finished reading. I would be much pleased to read about after their rapprochement about others as well... because I loved Draco and Gin and Luna and everybody. (Yeah, for me it isn’t often to enjoy other characters in snarry ff, but I really like your characters and their stories.) Such a preview wouldn't hurt anybody I think and I would be in heaven. Oh, I'm really sad that it's over. Their relationship was fuel for me. I couldn't believe that such, such a beautiful story exist, I thought it extinct somewhere along the way. Thank you! I can't explain in right words how I enjoyed your writing, your whole work and how happy and glad I am that you've finished it. It was absolutely worth it with every letter. Veridari: I love your art and I love your naked Severus immensely. THANK YOU!