conzieu – Severus removing his memory block and Harry coming into his full magic were both very dramatic scenes (though I wish Harry would have used his animagus form again, maybe in a moment of stress – imagine Petr's face waking up next to a black mamba...). I enjoyed the camaraderie between the Hogwarts staff, Filius especially was fun here. I also liked the way you described key scenes between Harry and Severus first from one PoV then the other. But oh, the angst you put the boys through! I'm so glad you eventually relented. That said, I would happily read another 200k of your richly detailed interpretation of the Potterverse!
veridari – your artwork is gorgeous. Naked Severus in the rain, mmmm. And Harry and Severus flying together look so in tune. Lovely!