An original tale, masterfully conceived and executed, and beautifully illustrated. It did feel like a fractured fairy tale of sorts, and the description of the very tiny Severus' interactions with the normal-sized world was so effective and memorable. The last sections, after Severus is taken by the owlet, reminded me almost of magical realism, even though we were already immersed in a magical world. I'm not an art critic, know very little about it and don't feel qualified to critique it, but can definitely say that it drew me in and held me. The details were phenomenal. I especially loved Harry's pose in the first drawing. Congratulations on a great work all around.