writcraft: I loved the non-linear aspects of your story, and the twist at the end was startling and well-played. The changes to canon, revealed as the story played out, were interesting and helped craft an original tale about two wounded men on such different - but similar - trajectories. I loved the intense focus on Harry and Severus in your story. I really liked how you used Draco - who remains in character. What a great way to bridge the Harry/Severus relationship. And I loved your art as well. I look on it so differently knowing that the author chose her own scenes and illustrated them as she saw them. That alone helped me so much understand how you saw these characters, in their loneliness and bitterness and in their eventual return to love. I really did enjoy this story. Thanks for all your effort bringing it to fruition. --SS