Writcraft—Loved the opening, seeing Severus settled into his Muggle life. It was a bit heartbreaking when Severus went to play and saw his and Harry's relationship unfold before his eyes, seeing what it was that Harry had felt, then seeing Harry himself. Their conversation at Harry's flat was so painful—Harry so very clearly a different man, an unhappy man. The little subplot with Draco was an interesting twist. I had wondered about the silver lily from the very first mention and I was happy Severus got his memory back of when he first got it. It was so very good to see Harry healing, with Severus at his side. Great job.
As for your art, I think it's great you decided to both write and illustrate it. I really like Harry's suit—he looks so mature and put together! And you know I really like the torso one. The hint of hair under the blanket, the scratches along his side, the lovely nipples. Just a delicious piece. The just before the kiss Snarry is lovely—my favorite kind of kiss.