Emynn: Lovely story all the way through. You have just a gift for pace and for dialogue - a real storyteller's touch. The premise of the story is so believable within the context and the characters remain so Severus and Harry despite the memory loss and Severus' virtual anonymity. Using the quilt was a wonderful way to wrap the fic together (and to wrap S & H together too). The enforced distance at the end was a great way to up the tension and give us a fulfilling resolution. As always, wonderful work.
Vividzephyr: The two scenes you've chosen are so contrasting in the fic and are perfect to bring emynn's words even more to life. I'm glad we get to see the quilt, and love how it's interwoven around the peaceful scene. The last scene is so exuberant - we can really see how H and S have both grown here. Love the colors overall, and your style. Not an art critic by any means, but (heh) I know what I like and this is amazing.