Emynn—To start at the end, that moment when Severus arrived was just so wonderful. All Harry's hard work worth the trouble he went to. I felt so horrible for Harry, not having his memories but I think when he was redosed by the Prophet, and clearly panicked, it brought home just how awful it was for him. Pansy made an excellent choice to write for the Prophet and Umbridge and Sophie were perfectly placed as possible villains. I really loved the charmed flowers, Harry's sneaky way to make sure Severus couldn't forget about him…as if that was even possible. Great job.
Vividescent—The quilt! It's gorgeous. I just love seeing the two of them tucked in together, finally able to relax. The dance is so very sexy. Great clothes, love the intensity of Harry's expression and it's just a wonderful scene in the fic, you illustrated it so well. Nice work.