Oh, I love period pieces. I found this one really unique - you worked so many details and so many characters into the story and really made it work. I really liked the change of pace and the growing awareness between the two when Severus came to Godric's Hollow and I giggled at the image of Severus presenting himself to the Queen as Harry's 'wife.' What an interesting twist that was and what a good way to have that heir (and the spare). I also enjoyed seeing Harry grow up in the time he and Severus were apart and how he was able to forgive Severus.
The art was so well done! I loved the first piece. I love the sense of space and how Harry's nakedness is so out of place in the opulent room. What a great scene that was, and a great choice to illustrate. I also love the old-fashioned bathtub and how well you conveyed the intimacy of that scene. Really nice work all the way around, both of you.