Nekofreakz—Fun setting, even including the Civil War. Gotta admit, I was happy that it didn't take long for Severus to really fall for Harry and Harry for Severus. Though I can't say I was surprised Severus over-reacted to Ginny's presence and did something so remarkably wrong. Seeing Harry's life, doing the best he could for the village around him was really just what I'd expect of him in any universe. The rescue by ship and their reunion was exciting and their eventual bonding/child a sweet happy ending. Great job.
Obiskus—You chose two intense scenes to illustrate and did so well with them. That first, with Severus so harsh to Harry—he's so clearly admiring the merchandise there, seeing what he's just paid for. I do love the details of the room as well: the books, candles, mantel, and carpet. The bath scene is lovely as well. The stool with candle and glasses as well as the tub itself. It seems so romantic and yet, it's not quite as Severus is still demanding of Harry rather than sharing a mutual encounter. Nicely done.