Emily Waters—I'm not so much one for the kink here but as far as the plot of the fic I really like the way Severus wanted to figure out the mystery of just what Harry's situation was, why he'd left the wizarding world for the most part, and Minerva, Ron and Hermione giving Severus clues along the way. After their big fight, it was nice to seem them being a bit more reasonable with each other though still contentious. Most of all I love the way Severus yet again finds a way to save Harry and he manages to get what he needs in return. Well done.
Laniern—The club with the reflection looks so cool. Love the lights, the girl in red, the car out front. The contrast between fully dressed Harry and naked, smoking Severus is phenomenal and powerful, too. The scene of them in the snow before Dumbledore's tomb is quite symbolic. I really like how small they seem in the white landscape, and yet, there they stand hand in hand. Very nicely done.