drarryxlover: what a heart-wrenching story. i felt so bad for the kids and their parents, and harry was so stressed out by what happening in his personal and professional life - there were no breaks for him. I felt like the problems in his professional life were affecting his ability to think clearly about his situation with Severus. Also, Severus was VERY forgiving of harry's mistake. His love for Harry showed throughout the fic. I felt like Harry had a lot to apologize for. He really didn't behave like he was in a committed relationship with Severus already, just running off.
7types: I loved how you choose two pictures of severus and harry together, one personally and one professionally. i felt like the tone of the artwork reflected the tone of the story - sharp and hopeful.