Drarryxlover—Oh, I felt so bad for Severus. I wish Harry had listened to him before, allowed him to explain. Good mystery about what had happened to the children and Harry working to find the problem and the cure, though it was sad he couldn't heal them all. Also, poor Dean and Seamus. That was a sad situation. I'm glad that Harry and Severus got their happy ending though. Nice work.
7types—Seeing the two of them together at the start made me sad since I knew it would be a long time till they got together again. Harry's face especially is lovely—he looks so content. I really like the second with Harry at the desk, the owl swooping in, Severus and his potions—them facing away from each other was a great was to show they hadn't quite kissed and made up at that point. Nice job.