Beautiful
Loved this story - what an original take on the possible side effects of Nagini's bite. Truly original. Loved how you wrote Snape in this story, how heartbreaking for him till he eventually can find piece in what he had become. **weep** loved it.
Love how Harry missed him so much that he came back just to be with him. Then the scene with the quilt - I love that!! This story got me right in the heart.
The art was beautiful. I'm a big fan of black and white drawings. I especially loved the one with them asleep. Even asleep you can feel how much they are "together". Wonderfully drawn.