I love the style of these, their clothes (the shoes!). I went back and re-read the fic before commenting just to freshen each scene in my mind (and to have a good cry). You just picked such perfect ones, they really convey the emotion of the story. I love how casually Harry takes over Severus's kitchen--looking so comfortable there cooking, like it's the most normal thing in the world; Harry running along beside Severus like a puppy, helping him with his books; the image of their feet (Harry on tiptoe) when Harry kisses him--such a great way to show that; the sadness and longing when Severus is remembering (which breaks my heart most about this fic--Severus going on for so long, waiting); and the last with Harry makes my heart clench and eyes tear up, those balled up bits of parchment and Harry's head down make clear his emotions. This is absolutely stunning and a perfect accompaniment for an excellent fic. Marvelous work.