A very interesting take on canon, and one I'll be re-reading. You gave each character so much depth and believable motivation. I very much liked how sympathetically you wrote Petunia, without ever taking away her awfulness, and her interactions with Luna were priceless. Severus, always working to protect Harry, willing to do whatever it took to get Petunia to agree to help Harry, was terrific, as was Harry, with vulnerabilities overlaid by adult responses. Very good, indeed.