I love this a million and one ways, but for the sake of space and my own personal dignity, I'll just say -- the UST! The action and adventure! The sex, guh. The scene where Severus appears in Harry's Floo and Harry's only half dressed. (Please, he HAD to know what he was getting into.) Protective!Severus as an official bodyguard...and just how romantic and lovely it was when Severus used that tracking spell...oh! And when Severus discovered Harry's drink could cause nausea and he was upset of course because it made Harry ill, but also because Harry might not be pregnant...such a wonderful, telling moment.
Oh, and the line "Well done, Minister"? *melts*
And the art! That tender look they're sharing is beautiful, and Rory is adorable! You can tell he has a bit of mischief in him and is ready to play! Love it.
Wonderful job to both writer and artist. Clearly I am incoherent in my love for this but the point is I love it mucho. ♥