Awww, I love the ending! <3 I'm so glad that Harry finally found perfection... in Severus. ;P
The scene in the Dungeon where they meet again and, like, talk between the lines about their preferences is just awesome, full of teasing... And the line that totally got me was: He winked at Severus and then flicked the crop at the older man’s thigh, close to his groin, making Severus hiss in pleasure. Guess who hissed as well. ;P
I kind of hate you for all the things you only hint at, though! Your description of the kids made me want to get to know them, and all the history you just skip... Don't give me the summary, give me the whole thiiiiiing! *scratches at your door until you write the backstory* (...Imagine the permanent winking smiley accompanying this paragraph, kay? ;) I'm just greedy like that. :P)
Thanks a lot for this sexy gift! <3 The images you put in my head... thank goodness I need to go to bed now, anyway. ;P