Mmmmm - how lovely. You captured that odd restlessness, unease that I imagine would have ridden both Harry and Severus after Voldy's downfall, and you did it quietly, without dramatics. And you had Severus flying with Harry, which I think is just so glorious. Thank you.
(GRRR! I thought I'd posted a comment on LJ, but it appears my comments aren't 'taking')