I love the catalyst for the whole romp being a name mix-up on the Ministry office doors, the fact that Severus has body image issues, & the way he wanted to conjure a bird to poop on Draco’s fine robes! Oh, & the poetic way Severus describes Harry's eyes, & the banter between Draco & Severus is wonderful! I think this Charlotte Jorby's going to have her hands full filling orders for those poster-sized photographs of Severus & Harry's romantic reunion! LOL!
The artwork is perfect for the story. You, mystery artist, picked two of my favorite scenes to illustrate! I really do get the feeling that Harry's about to grab Severus in the first scene at the bar (it's in his eyes), and the second one is bang-on! That kiss, the color of their robes, Draco's raised eyebrow & miffed look, & the shading & detail in all the items on the table are brilliant!