Oh, this is gorgeous. It has left me a puddle of sweet goo, so I'll just do a list to attempt to cover everything:
- BABY HARRY! *snuggles him* - You draw a beautiful Lily. She looks so peaceful. - The single bright star in each panel. - Badass, protective Harry. Even when fighting off the bad guys, he holds onto what's important...Severus. And his expression -- intense. Nobody hurts his Severus and lives. - Severus's vulnerable expression. Not many people get to see that, and it's so touching that he's just allowing Harry to be in charge and protect him for once. The amount of love and trust in his expression and both of their positions is just breathtaking. - The phrase works really well in this piece. You just tied it in beautifully.
Just an absolutely stunning piece. I'll be going back to look at it VERY regularly. ♥