I love the town's theme and how two wizards actually show up there. Ha! Also, this is a very interesting take on Harry being the master of Death. Cause it's not really explored so much in fanon, and I think this was a very nice take on that canon fact.
And kudos for some cute professions for the both of them. I especially enjoyed how Harry and Severus gradually became friends, and I laughed a bit at Severus being drunk. Sad, yes, but Severus is adorable when inebriated.