Oh, to wake up and hear that voice (probably not saying "Ride me, Harry" though)....
Great work with the cliche, great hot sex...this might be the only fic I've ever read with Harry giving Sev a BJ while in labor (I'm sure alert readers will point me to others if they're out there)!
Oh--and the artwork. Niiiiiiiiice. Harry reminds me of Superman. Love their hands in the pic.