I kinda feel bad for Hermione. I think she's the only one who didn't get to see Snape's wondercock.
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I loved this, but then I think I've loved everything you've written. Snape's mental journey, his frustration was just delicious to read. I think I felt it along with him.
And I always adore your characterization of Harry. It's such a joy to read him as a mature younger man, not a little boy. Your Harry is someone I could imagine conquering your Severus easily.