I'm so sorry but I've only just managed to read this now and just let me say wtf didn't I sooner ;D
It was bloody fantastic. I loved how Severus made Snape jealous and when Severus and Harry were fucking and Snape came down and stopped them, OMG he was so jealous and so hating it, but I just loved this, this turmoil going through Snape was just wonderful to watch. And Severus was such a teenager, whining and complaining when he didn't get to see Harry to have his turn with Harry, it was just fantastic. This is definitely a keeper and when I want something to cheer myself up with, this is the story I'm going to go too.
Let me also say, how wonderful I thought Ron was, I know he didn't say much, but that was so much better than him screaming and shouting at Harry like he would normally do.
I just wish I had an icon that had both Snape's with Harry *sighs*