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spfestmod (spfestmod) wrote in snape_potter,
@ 2010-09-17 08:48:00

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back to hogwarts, rating: nc-17

Back to Hogwarts: FIC: While Visions of Children All Danced Through Their Heads
Title: While Visions of Children All Danced Through Their Heads
Author: starduchess
Other pairings/threesome: Snape/Harry, Ron/Hermione, transitions to Snape/Harry/Hermione
Rating: NC-17
Word count: 10,600
Warnings: (highlight for spoilers) *Established relationship, first time, EWE, threesome, explicit sexual content, het and slash*
Prompt: Going back to Hogwarts, visions of children
Summary: Hermione has had one too many fights with Ron. Snape and Harry have a proposal that might save her from a life of red-headed children.
A/N: I like both het and slash so why not put them together? I think I found a new OT3! Anyway, thanks go to my betas keppiehed and lauredhel3019. You ladies are wonderful!

While Visions of Children All Danced Through Their Heads

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	aeryun 2010-09-17 04:40 pm UTC (link)
	I have read this trio before, I am like it! You did a wonderful job. I do have to admit that the unresolved angst did detract from the story, for me. But, all in all, it was enjoyable! (Reply to this) (Thread)

	starduchess 2010-09-24 06:04 pm UTC (link)
	I probably left the angst in there because 1) that's always a little bit inside me, 2) it makes the story feel more real, and 3) I must have already been planning the sequel in my subconscious so this gives me something to bridge between the stories. Glad you still enjoyed it, even with that in there! (Reply to this) (Parent)

	truly brilliant idea! sesssesssama 2010-09-18 01:41 am UTC (link)
	I have never liked threesomes before - I really hate them (especially Draco/Sev/Harry ones). You have done the impossible - created a threesome that I can actually like and read! Bravo! (Reply to this) (Thread)

	Re: truly brilliant idea! starduchess 2010-09-24 06:06 pm UTC (link)
	Yay! a convert! Glad you enjoyed it so much! I'll be sure to let you know if I ever write the sequel. ;) (Reply to this) (Parent)

k8bnimble
2010-09-18 01:01 pm UTC (link)

I liked how you managed Snape/Harry/Hermione. Here they seem quite appropriate to be together but Ron sure turned out to be a jerk! I imagine Harry and he won't be friends for long. And kudos to Harry for finally deciding to get involved for Teddy's sake. I've never really understood Hermione and Ron together anyways. I always imagined in ten years, Hermione would wonder what the hell she was thinking and Ron would think she became a nag. I always thought they brought the worst out in each other. To be honest, if I were into het - I always saw Harry and Hermione as a more likely pairing or even Snape/Hermione as at least they had an intellectual compatibility. But of course, in my world, Snape is the right one for Harry as a couple. I thought this was nicely done though.

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starduchess
2010-09-24 06:13 pm UTC (link)

Whoohoo! So glad you approved of how I put them together.

I didn't really mean for Ron to be a complete berk in this, although I've never really liked his character. He and Hermione just have very different tastes, interests and expectations. After a while, I can see the novelty of being together ware off, and Hermione would want someone more on her emotional and intellectual level. And background, since she, Harry and Snape all grew up in the Muggle World.

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	starduchess 2010-09-24 06:22 pm UTC (link)
	Also, the whole Teddy and anti non-wizard bit was added to have an external public plot line congruent and helping to motivate the internal relationship changes. Harry's decision to get involved was the resolution to his internal struggle, but I left the public part unresolved to have something for them to do in the sequel. (Reply to this) (Parent)

	torino10154 2010-09-21 05:57 pm UTC (link)
	My favorite part was most definitely the sex. fans self You did a great job making this threesome work. (Reply to this) (Thread)

	starduchess 2010-09-24 06:14 pm UTC (link)
	We all enjoy the sex, don't we? :) Glad it came together so well. Thanks so much for hosting this fest! (Reply to this) (Parent)

	szefi 2010-09-24 05:43 am UTC (link)
	I liked this story, though it's not my usual 3some:) It's great, that Harry decided to help against the spouted propaganda. (Reply to this) (Thread)

starduchess
2010-09-24 06:19 pm UTC (link)

Glad you took a chance on this threesome and liked it!

The whole Teddy and propaganda thing came about because I wanted an external story to help motivate them into the threesome. Harry's decision to help was the resolution to his internal struggle, but I left the public part unresolved to have something for them to do in the future. A sequel? Yes, perhaps, although that will have to be next year's project!

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