Wow, I really liked this. I was drawn right in by the excellent writing, the raw, graphic, wrong-but-good descriptions of the sex . . . and all the time I was so uncomfortable. Every moment was full of this unbearable tension, crying out for resolution. And even though it was painful, the climax made me gasp. I always feel great writing makes the ending seem inevitable, even if it's not where the reader initially wanted to go, and this really is great writing!