Wonderful story! You made this gentler version of Snape very believable, having had to care for Beckham. I liked Harry here, still grieving for his wife but moving on. The scene where he cries and his children come to him, all of them comforting each other, was very moving. Draco being dead was quite a surprise, although I realise now that you had left some clues. You portrayed him very well : a man realising that what he has been taught doesn't have to be right and atoning for his poor choices. And the school! I was glad to see a place in the wizarding world where children can meet each other before Hogwarts and learn to make friends based on merit and not blood. Very sweet, caring story, I loved it.