Now I want some apple crisp! I too am a new writer to snarry and the more experienced writers of this group are generously "betaing" (is that a word?) my work before I post so I will leave suggestions for improvements for your story in their capable hands.
Things I liked about this fic - Draco and Harry's repartee, Hermione's attempt to protect Harry (even if we know it's wrong), the run through of the folks Draco won't date and, of course, the Apple Crisp. Nice first story. I look forward to future work and now I'm going to find something apple crispy-like (without the rosemary) to eat.