Mmmm... "visceral". One of my favorite words. :) I was hoping that on a re-read, it would be obvious where the conversation was going - but not the first time! I may or may not have a accomplished it. :) Your comment reads so professionally - I feel like yours is a review in a magazine! (It makes me happy.) To hear you love it thrills me to no end, especially being that I'm a fairly new writer in fanfic. I hope that this isn't my Citizen Kane. :)