What an absolutely glorious story. I felt so much throughout the whole thing because you wrote and used words that made me feel everything from the wry amusement to the crushing betrayal. I didn't want it to end.
The scene where Harry brings dinner and a tablecloth had me in tears. I felt shocked when Severus overheard about the fake bet even though I'd read the prompt! The range of sweet, painful, innocent, lustful and loving moments was amazing. Also, the boys were so in character or at least they were a Severus and Harry I could definitely see. Also have to mention the love for those sweet, sneaky glances at eachother in the shop.
I can't wait to find out the author (mainly to make sure I've read all your stuff)! I could hazard a guess but I feel like too much of a newbie still to do so. Thanks for such a great story mystery writer!