I wonder, what can I say about this that I haven't already? Your storytelling is so compelling. It's the rhythm of your writing, the way you weave in detail, emotion and plot -- I lose myself in it every time. Now was no exception; in fact, this piece felt far more "complete" than the 13,000 words might suggest. I don't know how you do that, but I suspect it's just part of that particular brand of magic you keep up your sleeve.