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Title: The Buddy System, XIV
Challenge: Resolution: pay more attention to appearance
Word Count: 100
“Competitions?” said Severus. He stopped next to an illusion of perfectly dressed couples twirling to a Viennese waltz. “Competitions?”
“Ah, Mr. Lupin! How lovely to see you!” cried a clerk. He rushed up, bussed Remus on both cheeks in the Russian fashion, and turned to Severus. “And here is your dance partner at last! What an honor!”
“I'm here to buy robes - “
“I can see why you need a makeover – great heavens, your hair!” The clerk seized Severus by the wrist and all but dragged him into a small salon. “Marcella! A customer!”
Challenge: Resolution: pay more attention to appearance
Word Count: 100
“Competitions?” said Severus. He stopped next to an illusion of perfectly dressed couples twirling to a Viennese waltz. “Competitions?”
“Ah, Mr. Lupin! How lovely to see you!” cried a clerk. He rushed up, bussed Remus on both cheeks in the Russian fashion, and turned to Severus. “And here is your dance partner at last! What an honor!”
“I'm here to buy robes - “
“I can see why you need a makeover – great heavens, your hair!” The clerk seized Severus by the wrist and all but dragged him into a small salon. “Marcella! A customer!”